There comes a time in young people’s lives when they reach a realization. A moment comes when they recognize that they are not invincible and they come to understand that there are consequences for their actions. This idea is brilliantly shown in T. Corgahessan Boyle’s short story “Greasy Lake” through the development of the three boys, especially the narrator who remains unnamed throughout the story. As the three boys go through the episodes of that night on Greasy Lake, they experience truly horrible events. And even though “[they] were bad,” the three boys were utterly unprepared for the physical and emotional turmoil that they went through that night. The boys believe themselves to be bad characters during a time “when it was good to be bad.” As the story of that night on Greasy Lake progress, we see how the boys romanticize being bad and view it as the cool thing to do; however, when a dangerous situation actually confronts these “dangerous characters,” they are not prepared to handle it.
The attitudes of the three boys are made clear in the first few paragraphs of the story. An understanding of how the narrator and his friends view themselves is summed up through witty descriptions and jokes. For instance, the narrator said that Digby “wore a gold star in his right ear.” This piece of jewelry represents Digby’s rebellion towards society since his parents and other authority figures most likely do not want him wearing an earring. Also the witty comment that Digby “allowed his father to pay his tuition at Cornell” shows the boys’ over-inflated egos. Jeff is considering quitting school to live as a “painter/musician/head-shop proprietor.” This life that Jeff is considering is the epitome of what the dangerous characters during the time would do. The narrator respects Digby and Jeff because they were “expert in the social graces.” They could come up with quick and witty sneers, drive cars fast, roll the best joints, dance like it was nobody’s business, wear mirror shades any and everywhere, and “trade ‘man’s with the best of them.” The narrator’s utmost respect for his friends is due to the fact that they represent what it meant, in the boys’ minds, to be cool. Boyle puts it best when he says, “in short, they were bad.”
The night of the incident on Greasy Lake is the third night of summer vacation. The boys have been driving around town all night, been in every club and bar, and created mischief wherever they could. This description seems to fit the ideal way in which the boys want to be seen. But following this description is a striking comment by the narrator, in which he explains that the boys have been “looking for something [they] never found.” Even more interesting is once the boys reach Greasy Lake the narrator says that, “whatever it was we were looking for, we weren’t about to find it at Greasy Lake.” This comment shows that the boys do not even know what they are looking for. They are three young men caught up in the act of being “bad” when they don’t even know what it is they want. Is it possible that the boys really are not as dangerous as they want to come off as? The boys are putting on act because they romanticize the idea of being bad.
The incidents that night give the boys a glimpse of what it means to truly be a dangerous character. While fighting the car freak with the tire iron the narrator explains the background story of his tire iron. He goes on about how he kept a tire iron under the driver’s seat because “bad characters always keep tire irons under the driver’s seat.” He then explains how he has not been in a fight since the sixth grade and how he had only “touched the tire iron twice before, to change tires.” These comments show that the narrator is not really as bad as he believes himself to be. Although in the heat of the moment he does hit the car freak with the tire iron, and soon after the boys attempt to rape the fox, once alone and hiding in the lake the narrator looks back at what has happened and says to himself, “I was nineteen, a mere child, an infant, and here in the space of five minutes I’d struck down one greasy character and blundered into the waterlogged carcass of a second.” This quote is immensely important since it shows how the narrator is not prepared or desirous of the nitty-gritty parts of being a “dangerous character.” All three of them are scared and horrified at what has happened. The narrator is especially shaken since he is the one who found Al’s body in the lake. During the incidents of that night, the boys realize what the consequences of “being bad” are.
An interesting reoccurring quote can sum up the realization and change the boys undergo during the incident. The second paragraph of the story gives a description of Greasy Lake. In it the narrator glorifies how the lake is the place to be for bad and dangerous characters. He explains how people “drink beer, smoke pot, and howl at the stars.” The paragraph ends with the quote “this was nature.” Once dawn comes the narrator gives a description of the aftermath of the scene around him. His shell-shocked tone embraces the fact of how shaken he is by what happened that night. The paragraph ends with a familiar three-word sentence that shows the 180-degree turn the narrator has taken, “this was nature.”
Do you think the boys “party”/”hangout” anymore?
Do you think the narrator ever told Digby and Jeff about the body?
Sunday, September 27, 2009
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Kevin,
ReplyDeleteTo start with, I really loved the way you wrote this essay. Not only is it well written, but its insightful honesty (which is so uniquely Kevin-esque) made it really fun to read. I think my favorite part is when you talk about how the boys were not actually all they tried to be; that they were, in reality, "romanticizing" the concept of being "bad": "They are three young men caught up in the act of being “bad” when they don’t even know what it is they want. Is it possible that the boys really are not as dangerous as they want to come off as? The boys are putting on act because they romanticize the idea of being bad."
I love the way you used the text and various quotes to support that idea throughout the essay.
Great job!
ps after I read your essay on Greasy Lake, I sort of scrolled down and maybeee read your essay on Teenage Wasteland. And I maybeee loved it. especially the end: "So maybe that's the beauty found in "Teenage Wasteland's" seemingly negative over-arching message. Control what you can."
Keevsin Crain,
ReplyDeleteThis essay was really well written and filled with great insights! At the end of your essays first paragraph, you bring up the point that the boys are putting on a kind of "act." I really agreed with, and liked that idea and that all you assciated with it. You showed the progression from, naive focus on outward appearance to realizing the gravity of their being "bad," flawlessly. Nicely done!